Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Lights





A Ray of Sunshine

Penetrating the Jungle

Of Million years old


I walk carefully

Through the hills and mountains

Steps treading lightly


The Lights coming through

The Canopy of Tall tress

Giving Life to many


This is in response to prompt of day 20 in Haiku Heights, entitled "Lights".

It was an experience in climbing Gunung Berembun during the Annual Camp in Brinchang which was then pristine, unlike now where there are too many buildings that have spoilt the beauty of nature in the Highlands.

2 comments:

kaykuala said...

Dear Hal,
Beautiful haiku! You're spot on. One can feel the power of the verse. Your process note is classic. I'm going to follow you on that. Some poets make their readers guess what it is they are writing on. They risk readers not reading through because the readers don't understand. A process note is the answer. It explains the context or background. I'll do just that, forthwith! Thanks!

Hank

abdulhalimshah said...

What you told me holds true. Once you start the momentum,the flow keeps going. You are now a Master of Haiku. My profound thanks to your inspiration.